created a soul with wit
and grace is 2-6

will and frank
So, evidently I need to incorporate the season into my Haiku for it to be true to Japanese form (hence the reference to sun). And I'm not sure if the number thing is cheating on the syllable rule. Happy birthday!
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They sleep safely in their beds because rough men stand ready in the night to visit violence on those who would do them harm.
The existing social order is a swindle and its cherished beliefs are mostly illusions.
No fair, Lee. Why do Frank and I get the creepy vigilante comments?
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